When populations move to a new country, they must abide by that location's
and traditions. I believe that
statement is true to a certain extent,
it is
important that the
moving do not lose their original identity.
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the societies of the countries they immigrate to,
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they should do
in order to not
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the locals. Almost all countries have unique customs they follow
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if someone new doesn't follow these
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they may come off as disrespectful.
, in the Middle
it is common that women dress more conservatively than they do in the West. It is reasonable for inhabitants of Middle Eastern nations to expect visitors
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too provocatively in order to not
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them.
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that does not mean that they are appropriate where they currently live. A prime occurrence of
is seen in the United States, where all members of a crowd stand during the national anthem. Even if you are not an American citizen, it is a sign of respect to stand during the national anthem
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not doing so would only unnecessarily disturb others.
,
it is important to do our best to fit
a new society, we must
not lose the
we came from in the process. Humans require a strong sense of identity, and without
they struggle.
reason, we must always remember where we came from. Greek
demonstrate
in a great way in the city of Warsaw, where they
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monthly cultural events to represent their country and keep in touch with other Greeks. Another reason one must always represent their
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footing when moving. It is very difficult to start fresh, and
from your home country can be of great help in making
process easier. A common example is the Indian community, who are very tight-knit
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matter the place or time and always try to help one another
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and can aid someone in more meaningful ways.
In conclusion, I agree that we must respect the traditions of the nations we move to, but I
believe we must not forget the
we left. We must preserve our own customs
we can,
simultaneously respecting the place we live in.