You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe the problems • what you would like him/her to do.

Dear

Mr.

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Smith, I am Leo Torres, who moved

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into

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your Apt - 312 in Downtown Toronto with my wife and kids on 2nd March, 2026. I am writing

this

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letter to bring your attention towards some issues we are facing at

this

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place since the day we moved in . First of all, the heating system is not working

fine

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properly

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. As winters are going on , I set the

temprature

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temperature

high everytime but

thermostat

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the thermostat

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is not maintaining it , sadly , someone needs to keep checking it every two hours

which

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, which

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is hard

specially

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in night.

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, the kitchen sink is leaking, leaving

foul

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a foul

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smell and contaminated water after every dishwashing session. These are some problems which require your

immidiate

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immediate

attention. I would like you to please send a HVAC technician and a plumber at the earliest possibility

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these issues cannot wait and

hampers

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hamper

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our everyday lives. I am

hoiping

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hoping

you will understand the situation and get these problems fixed. Yours

Sincerly

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sincerely

, Leo

tarun.shar1994

Mar 18, 2026

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task response

Task response: You answer all parts of the task, but add a bit more detail about how the problems affect your family.

task response

Task response: Your tone is mostly good for a letter to a landlord, but some lines can be more polite and clear.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter is easy to follow with a clear start, middle, and end.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Use linking words like 'also', 'because', and 'so' to make ideas join better.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Keep spaces and punctuation more tidy to make the letter look smoother.

task response

Task response: You introduce yourself, state the problems, and say what you want the landlord to do.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph has one main idea, so the reader can follow your message well.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The greeting and closing are both used, which helps the letter format.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

165 words

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landlord
apartment
rent
problems
family
move in
leak
water
heating
repair
request
quickly
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date
fix
issue
welcome
contact
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You and your family have just rented an apartment and one or two problems occurred. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe the problems • what you would like him/her to do.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

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