You have had a problem with your neighbor for the past few months. You have not been able to meet with your neighbor to discuss the problem. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Explain what action you will take if the situation does not improve.

Dear John, I am writing
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letter to express my concern regarding the house duties. I have been facing
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issue for the past few months. The main issue is that you are not doing household chores at all. I know you are engaged in your professional life, but that does not mean you will not participate in household chores. Whenever you come back from work, you finish your meal and leave the dirty dishes in the sink for the whole night, despite
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you
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eat my meal
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I have prepared for myself,
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which I always get late at work. On weekends, you invite your friends for the party
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afterwards
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you don’t even clean the living room.
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I believe we should divide the household chores equally.On weekends
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common
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bathroom will come under my duties
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living
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the living
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room under yours.We will wash our own dishes and put
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back
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the
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. One important detail I would like to mention is
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there is no progress and
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the situation
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remains the same, I have to communicate
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to our landlord. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best Regards, Saransh Sharma

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Task response: You answer all parts, but some ideas need to be more clear and more exact.
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Task response: The tone is a bit too direct in some lines. Use a more polite style for a letter to a neighbor.
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Coherence and cohesion: Your ideas are in a clear order, but some long lines are hard to follow.
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Coherence and cohesion: Add small linking words and leave one clear idea in each sentence.
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Task response: You explain the problem, give a solution, and say what you will do next.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear opening, body, and ending.
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