The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart displays the growth of international visitors and travellers in the UK during 20 years (1979-1999),
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the bar diagram compares how many UK residents
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five different countries in 1999. In general, both of the categories increase significantly during the periods, with the overseas travellers reporting the highest level
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.
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, Spain and France
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the most visited nations in 1999.
According to
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the trajectory data, in 1979, the
number
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of international departures and arrivals stood at the same level, forming 10
million
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. Rising modestly, the prior jumped noticeably for the remaining periods, peaking
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highest level of 55
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by 1999. Meanwhile, the latter grew slowly, reaching its final
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around threefold of its original figure. Moving to the second chart, it can
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that France and Spain were the most visited countries among the residents, responsible for 10
million
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visits in 1999.
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, the USA and Greece made up a fraction
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. Contributing to the lowest
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(2
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), Turkey,
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, was the least popular destination among the British.

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