The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrates the percentage of different age groups of

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tourists in a certain country from 1978 to 2008.

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, the start of

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visits at the beginning of the

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at all ages were similar

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however

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at the end

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of the line data, it was slightly different. Meanwhile, the

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has a fixed percentage at a certain point. Based on the

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, the number of people aged from 14

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24 in 1978 declined until 1988. In 1988, both the 14-24 and 50+ age groups were at a thriving

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where they had decreased significantly.

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, more

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visits came after 2003 with people aged 50+.

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, before 2003, a percentage of 40 per cent for people aged 50+

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were visiting the

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at a fixed range between 1998 and 2003. For the 25-34 and 35-49 age groups, they were almost similar, but with different percentages. In 1988, both the 25-34 and 35-49 ages have had an increase between 1988 and 1998. with 70% of visitors being between 25-34 in 1998, and about 60% of visitors

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between 35-49 in 1988.