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The chart below shows the number of international students enrolled in three universities in a country between 2015 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below illustrates the number of international students enrolled in three universities in a country between 2015 and 2020.
Overall
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,
university
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 A remained the highest throughout the period. On one hand,
university
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 A
increase
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increased
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 gradually from 2015 by 8000 to 2020 to
the
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a
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 total
15,500
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of 15,500
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,
while
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university
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 B
increase
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increased
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 steadily from 6,000 to 11,500. On
other
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the other
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 hand,
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university
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University
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 C
record
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records
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 the lowest figures in every year, starting
by 4000
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with 4,000
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 international students and peaking at 8,000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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