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The chart below shows the number of international students enrolled in three universities in a country between 2015 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below illustrates the number of international students enrolled in three universities in a country between 2015 and 2020.
Overall
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,
university
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 A remained the highest throughout the period. On one hand,
university
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 A
increase
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increased
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 gradually from 2015 by 8000 to 2020 to
the
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a
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 total
15,500
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of 15,500
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,
while
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university
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 B
increase
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increased
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 steadily from 6,000 to 11,500. On
other
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the other
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 hand,
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university
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University
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 C
record
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records
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 the lowest figures in every year, starting
by 4000
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with 4,000
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 international students and peaking at 8,000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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