The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.

The pie charts

demostrates

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the percentage of maximum energy in gigawatts in the year 2015 with estimations for 2040.

Overall

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, fossil fuels had the most energy capacity in past and

expected

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are expected

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that

this

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proportion

will be less

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apply

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in future years

but

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, but

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will still

the

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lead.

Meanwhile

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Meanwhile,

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solar was the least but will give

his

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its

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place to nuclear in

forthcoming

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years. In 2015, Solar was the

last

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one compared to the other four with 2%,

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however

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however,

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nuclear had tripled that number and

the being

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was

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the third one with 6%. Wind was the second when we start from the end, between Solar and Nuclear

with

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, with

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5%. Other renewables was 23%, the second

lead

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largest,

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and

this

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percentage nearly doubled and became %64 when we are looking to fossil fuels. In 2040, Wind and Solar will

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increase to 12% and 18% respectivally. The fossil fuels will dramatically decline

%64

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%44 the

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44%. The

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other two energy

will

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sources will

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also

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drop

but

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, but

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more gently

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Other renewables 23% to 21% and Nuclear 6% to 5%.

ruzgar.yalkin27

Apr 6, 2026

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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168 words

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