The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The given floor plans demonstrate a factory district in Norbiton right now and the future plan of
this
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area
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.
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, the
area
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will be changed into a residential complex with more roads being constructed in the future. Let’s have a close look at the specific construction plan. The farmland will
moved
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be moved
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to the north east of the
area
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, and a T- junction
road
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will be built across the river
with
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the north
end
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being a
side
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road
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and the other
end
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leading to the roundabout in the middle of the
area
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. One housing block will be constructed
to
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at
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the far
end
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of the north
side
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,
while
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the other housing blocks will
scattered
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be scattered
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all around between the river and the southern
road
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which
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will welcome a newly built smaller roundabout in the middle of it. The bigger roundabout will remain in the middle of the
area
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, but a new
side
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road
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will be added to the north west of it
with
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two new apartments being built alongside it and
to
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at
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the
end
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of it. The
road
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to the east
side
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of the
the
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big roundabout will
be still
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still be
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,
whereas
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the four factories on both
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side
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sides
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of the
road
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will be converted into three housing
complex
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complexes
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with two smaller ones on the north
side
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and a bigger one on the south. A
newly
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new
playground will
also
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be introduced to the north
side
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of
this
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road
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with a small brand path leading to it. The factory at the
east most
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easternmost
end
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of
this
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road
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will be renovated into a school
which
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, which
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will be about two times larger than the factory. There will be shops
building
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built
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to the south west part of the bigger roundabout, and a newly built medical centre to the south east of it.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road, end, side with synonyms.
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