I think it is quite useful because if you put your hobbies and interest as your personal information and you applied to your dream job that has the similarity with your hobbies or your interest i think you had a higher chance of getting accepted but for the married or single information its not as useful as the other one because i think being married or single doesnt effect to your job
Sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Write a full answer for both sides of the topic, then give your own view clearly.
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Add one or two simple examples to support your ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear paragraphing: one intro, one body for side one, one body for side two, and a short conclusion.
coherence and cohesion
Link ideas with simple words like because, however, for example, and therefore.
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You gave your own opinion clearly about hobbies and about married or single status.
coherence and cohesion
Your main idea is easy to follow in most parts.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general