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The table below shows number of visits to selected coutries from four UK airports in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided table illustrates the
number
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 of
visits
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 from four UK airports to selected countries in 2013.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the total
number
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 of
flights
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 from Heathrow Airport is significantly lower compared to the rest.
For example
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, the
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 of
visits
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 abroad from Manchester and Stansted is higher than one thousand,
while
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 from Gatwick it is more than two thousand.
However
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, the total of stops from Heathrow is 884, with the maximum
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 of 278 being to the Irish Republic and the minimum of one visit to Lithuania.
By contrast
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, the highest
number
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 of
visits
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 abroad was from Gatwick with 2,334 in total; the highest
number
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 of
flights
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 was to Spain with 1,896, and the lowest was to Lithuania with 15.
By comparison
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, the total
number
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 of
visits
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 from Manchester was 1,995, with zero
flights
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 to Lithuania and 1,715 to Spain.
Similarly
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, the highest
number
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 of
flights
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 from Stansted Airport was to Spain with 814,
while
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 the lowest was zero to Canada, with a total
number
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 of 1,087
visits
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 abroad.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visits, flights with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
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