The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer.

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The pie chart and line graph illustrate what mainly uses
electricity
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and what is the demand in England between winter and summer.
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, the line graph shows how much
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electricity is used
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electricity
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in England. In winter, we see
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the stability start and end of the period. It is clearly seen that
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more
electricity
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in
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winter than
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in summer
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. The pie chart demonstrates what is
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electricity
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. Large parts
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electricity
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for heating rooms and water,
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which is
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a significant difference
than
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from
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others.

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