The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The three maps illustrate the layout of Meadowside
village
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and
the
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Fonton
town
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in 1962
and
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,
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1985, and
present
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the present
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.
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, the area has been significantly transformed over the time periods, including a massive geographical
expanssions
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expansion
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. In the year 1962, Meadowside
village
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and
the
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Fonton
town
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were not connected
in
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by
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any method of transportation
even
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, even
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they
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though they
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had
seperate
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separate
transportation routes
with in
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within
.
Besides
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, Fonoton
town
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was
norticeably
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noticeably
larger than the Meadownside
village
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, in terms of space.
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, in 1985, the proportion of the area
has been
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was
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massively increased
on
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in
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both areas with the introduction of new
infrasturcutures
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infrastructure
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, housing and facilities
such
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as a housing estate, a leisure complex, a
super store
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superstore
and a new
road
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.
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, the small
road
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was developed
in to
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into
a modern
road
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whereas
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, whereas
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a new
road
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was constructed to connect the
village
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and the
town
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. The major change at present when comparing with the past is that the two areas are now fully connected
geogrpically
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geographically
and the Meadowside
village
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has been converted into a suburb.
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, many considerable changes have
occured
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occurred
in the area, including a new railway
road
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with a station, a business park, and a hotel
along with
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more
specious
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spacious
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housing estate.
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the Leisure complex and the supper store reamind constant.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, town, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • rural area
  • expansion
  • infrastructure
  • commercial development
  • housing development
  • population growth
  • key landmarks
  • transformation
  • local community
  • economy
  • environmental impact
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