The graph shows the percentage of 15-year-olds with low literacy (reading and writing) levels in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the proportions of knowledge levels of 15-year-olds in Austria, Denmark, Ireland and Sweden. The units are measured in percentage.
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, the proportion of students with low education rates in Austria, Ireland and Sweden over the period
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increased their literacy rates moderately.
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, Denmark was the only country which shows a steady improvement, ending the period with the lowest rate of struggling readers and writers. In 2000, Sweden and Ireland began with the lowest proportions of low literacy at approximately 13% and 11%, respectively. Both countries saw a gradual rise over the nine years , and
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2009, they shared the same proportion by around 17%. Austria experienced the most significant fluctuations. Starting at approximately 15% in 2000, the figure jumped sharply to 20% by 2003. After a slight dip in 2006, the rate climbed again to reach a peak of nearly 28% in 2009, making it the country with the highest proportion of low-achieving students.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Literacy levels
  • Percentage
  • 15-year-olds
  • Low literacy
  • Reading and writing skills
  • Trends and patterns
  • Comparison
  • Significant differences
  • Similarities
  • Education systems
  • Socio-economic conditions
  • Main findings
  • Improvements
  • Positive trends
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