With advancements in artificial intelligence, robots are increasingly capable of performing tasks previously done by humans. Some believe this will lead to mass unemployment and social unrest, while others argue it will create new opportunities and improve our quality of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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that may create new opportunities and
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robots are commonly
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in China in hotels or airports. In the future, using
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these smart and
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Answer both sides more fully. Now you talk more about job loss than new chances.
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Give a clear opinion from the start and keep it the same through the essay.
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Add one or two clear examples for each main idea.
coherence cohesion
Make each body paragraph about one main point only.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words in a simple and correct way, like first, however, for example, and as a result.
coherence cohesion
Check that each sentence connects clearly to the one before it.
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You discuss both views and give your opinion.
coherence cohesion
The essay has an introduction and a short conclusion.
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You use one example about robots in China.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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