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Band 2.5

Ethanol fuel production from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting min features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write atleast 150 words.

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The Process diagram illustrates the manner in which
ethanol
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 is manufactured
fro
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from
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corn
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.
It is clear that
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,
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apply
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 there are nine steps beginning with
corn
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 and
subsequently
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 being cooked, fermented and
seperated
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separated
, eventually, purified
ethanol
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 is stored and transported to potential customers. The procedure kicksoff with
corn
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,
followeed
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followed
 by storing.
at
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At
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 the next stage, the
corn
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 is
then
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 taken to a
miller
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miller,
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 where it is milled into fine particles known as flour.
Thereafter
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, water is added to the milled
corn
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 and cooked
continously
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continuously
 for four hours. At the next stage, a biological process of fermentation takes place for
fourty eight
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forty-eight
 hours. After the two days, separation is done to achieve two products
,
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 a solid by-product and a liquid (
ethanol
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). The process continues to purification of
ethanol
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 for five hours before eventually storing the end product and
finally
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 transporting
to
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it to
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 the
market
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market,
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 where it can be used widely as a renewable fuel.

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task response
Add a short overview with the main stages in one clear sentence.
coherence and cohesion
Use clearer links between steps, like 'after this' and 'in the next step'.
coherence and cohesion
Check small word errors like 'fro', 'seperated', and 'kicksoff' because they can make meaning less clear.
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Mention all key stages in the same order as the diagram and keep each step short and clear.
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Avoid extra words like 'potential customers' if the diagram only shows transport.
coherence and cohesion
You describe the process in the correct order from start to end.
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You include most key stages such as cooking, fermentation, separation, purification, storage, and transport.
coherence and cohesion
You use some time markers like 'thereafter' and 'at the next stage'.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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