The table below provide information about the number of employees and factories in England and wales from 1851 to 1901

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of workers and factories in the UK and Wales.

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, we can state that male employees made up the largest share of the total

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employees

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figures for both genders had decreased by the end of the period, the opposite is true for the number of factories. The

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number of employed individuals was 477,100 in 1851

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287.000 of them were men.

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, after ten years, the

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of women empoyees accustomed for 160,000, which was 100,000 more than the next figure for

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gender.

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employees underwent a noticeable decline from 131,780 to 76,132 between 1861 and 1881 and continued to decrease to 31,000 by the end of the given period. Likely, the

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of female workers

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dropped by 10,000 each year

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after 1871, meaning it became only about 30,000 in 1901. In terms of factories'number,

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significantly from 225 to 721 in the first 30 years,

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underwent reduction by 121 by 1901.