the line graph shows various types of technology used in US from 1995-1999. write main features and give comparison where necessary

This

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line chart illustrates different technologies that

used

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were used

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in the United States between 1995 and 1999.

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, during the given period, the percentage of using

washing

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a washing

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machine was the highest,

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the Internet and the DVD players had the lowest rate. Looking at washers and computers, they were clearly higher than the other kinds of technology from the beginning. In 1995, 60% of houses

were own

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owned

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a washing machine, the percentage increased by 1996 into 70%,

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rate stayed the same until 1999, as it rose to 80%.

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computers started with 40%, and increased in a steady trend to reach 60% in 1998 and 70% by the end of the period. For the remaining types, they all were less than 30% in 1995, the Internet was only in 10% of the US houses,

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however

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the rate fluctuated between 20% and 30% until 1998.

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, there was a dramatic rise in 1999,

where

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when the

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Internet recorded 50%. DVD players did not record more than 40%,

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phones' percentage jumped from 20% in the start

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to 80% by 1999.