A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu

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Dear Karen, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to invite you to my birthday party that will be held next weekend. I am excited to celebrate my birthday with all my close friends. I have already planned some games

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as musical chairs, balloon burst, and passing the parcel, to make the event enjoyable.

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, I want a nice place with good food and a beautiful view. Fortunately,

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venue has all these features. The name of the

restaurant

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is "Kwality

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", which is popular for serving fresh food. You need to take the 511 bus from

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Humber

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, and get off at Steeles Avenue. You will see a clear board of

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restaurant

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next to you.

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restaurant

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is famous for serving Indian

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and desserts.

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, it offers discounts on most items. Let me know in advance if you want to add something special in menu. I am looking forward to seeing you soon! Warm wishes, Sam

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task response

Task response: You did not fully answer the task. You asked your friend to come, but the task asked you to ask for the restaurant name, the way to go there, and food ideas. These parts should be questions, not facts.

task response

Task response: The tone is warm, but some parts do not fit the task well. You should explain your party plan more clearly and ask for help about the restaurant.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear start and end, and the ideas are in a fair order. But the middle part is confusing because it sounds like you already know the restaurant.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Try to keep one main point in each part. One part can be about your party, one about the restaurant place, and one about the food.

task response

Task response: You wrote about your birthday party and gave some party details.

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Task response: The letter has a friendly tone and polite style.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear greeting and closing.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: You used simple linking words like 'Moreover', 'Fortunately', and 'Also'.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

birthday party
book a table
close friends
family dinner
warm atmosphere
restaurant name
directions
main street
near the station
easy to find
kind of food
menu
serve
dish
recommend
special meal
good choice
delicious
book in advance
hope to hear from you soon

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