The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing the eco-friendly fabric from bamboo. Generally speaking, the
fabric making-process
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fabric-making process
involves a series of nine linear stages, beginning with harvesting the raw material and ending with producing the final product
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such
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, such
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as clothes and
shocks
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shoes
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.
To begin
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with, bamboo plants
as
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, as
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the natural primary
resources
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resources,
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are planted in the spring season. After the autumn season
coming
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comes
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, they are
then
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cut down manually by the farmer.
Following
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this
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, they are put into a cutter machine to produce the strip pieces.
Next,
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they are crushed into
smallest
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the smallest
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pieces, prepared to be made into liquid pulp. After being converted into pulp, the long fibres are separated by
filtering
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a filtering
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process.
Then
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comes
to
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the
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softener step, where water and amine oxide are added and blended
together with
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extracted fibres, after which they are spun to shape a yarn. Eventually, a yarn is
further
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processed to produce a weave, which can be used to make clothes,
such
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as socks,
t-shirs
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t-shirts
, and other fabric products.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bamboo
  • fabric
  • cloth
  • fiber
  • yarn
  • thread
  • weave
  • knit
  • stages
  • steps
  • process
  • harvest
  • cut
  • crush
  • break
  • fiber
  • spin
  • weave
  • finish
  • wash
  • dye
  • color
  • soft
  • strong
  • material
  • final
  • make
  • from
  • to
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