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The table below gives information about past and projected population figures in various countries for different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given table reveals a clear distinction between previous and current
population
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 figures in various countries for different years. At the outset of the period, the United States showed a remarkably high
population
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 figure of 249.9 in the 1990s,
whereas
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 New Zealand accounted for the smallest proportion, at 3.4.
Furthermore
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, Australia was rising slowly from 17.1 to 26.0 by the end of the 2050s.
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, New Zealand
also
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 represented a minimal
number
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overall
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 and, in the 2050s, reached 4.7.
Moreover
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, Canada had the second-largest
population
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 after
USA
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the USA
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 and experienced a substantial increase in
population
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 from 26.6 to 39.0 in the 2050s.
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, the United States recorded the highest figure
overall
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 and, in the 2050s, reached 349.0.
Overall
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, the given table depicts that the USA had the largest
population
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number
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 and represented a significant
number
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 of the
population
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 between the 1990s and the 2050s,
whereas
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 Australia, Canada, and New Zealand showed a slight increase in
number
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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