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The line chart below gives information about the percentage of female members of parliament in European countries (2000 – 2012)

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The given line graph illustrates
that
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the ratio of female
parliament's member
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parliament members
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 in five European countries(Germany, Italy, France,
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UK
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the UK
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 and Belgium) from 2000 to 2012. The figures are measured by
percentage
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.
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, the graph indicates
upwarding
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upward
 trends over the
period
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,
which is
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 the most significant increase
can be
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found in
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UK
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the UK
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. In Germany, Italy and France, there are always more than a quarter
women
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of women
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member
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members
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 in parliament during the given
period
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. The
percentage
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 of Germany was 35%, which was the highest among
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the 5
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countries in the beginning year,
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 that of Italy had surpassed in 2012 and recorded under 40%.
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, France's
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 dramatically surged to more than 35% in 2004, but after that it decreased to approximately 28% by 2012.
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, in Belgium and
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UK
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the UK
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, the
percentage
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 of female parliament
member
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members
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 was
seen
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approximately 17% and under 5% respectively.
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, the graph of
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UK
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the UK
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 gradually increased over the
period
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,
ultimatley
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ultimately
 it could reach
to
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more than a
quater
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quarter
 in the
last
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period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, percentage, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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