The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart illustrates the locations that
students
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prefer for
dance
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classes,
while
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the bar chart shows the
number
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of
students
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choosing different types of
dance
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classes.
Overall
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,
although
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the highest
number
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of
students
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in the under-11
group
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preferred ballet, the smallest
number
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preferred modern
dance
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in
this
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age
group
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. Meanwhile, there were relatively similar numbers of
students
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who preferred tap
dance
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, and the largest percentage of
students
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chose private studios.
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the pie chart, 48% of
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chose private studios as their preferred location, which was the largest percentage;
however
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, college-based studios accounted for the lowest proportion, at 10%.
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, the highest
number
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of
students
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in the under-11
group
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preferred ballet. More than 600
students
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chose
this
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style.
Furthermore
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, in the 11–16 age
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, around 500
students
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chose modern
dance
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as their favourite type.
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there was a significant increase in the ballet, which accounted at 40% in 2011, the percentage of the other two types showed a rapid decrease.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, dance, number, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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