The diagram below shows how plastic bottles are recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This
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diagram illustrates the entire process of recycling
plastic
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bottles, from the moment people usually throw
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away to a final product made using recycled materials. The process consists of 10 steps The first three
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step
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involve disposing of garbage in the specific category bins.
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, at the recycling centre, the bottles that can be recycled are sorted from those that cannot. The next four
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will be about how to transform all the garbage by using manufacturing equipment , compressing
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Bottles into blocks for easier handling,
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these blocks are crushed into fragments and washed to clean any dirt
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this
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clean crushed
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is
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made into
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plastic
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pallets and these pellets are heated to
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the raw materials used for manufacturing new products
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the eighth
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, Raw material is ready to be transformed into various products, and ready to be sold to the customers, which is the
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step
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leads
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of the production, initiation of the recycling cycle once again.

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