You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to you regarding the

tour

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that you are arranging for a week. And I am eager to take part in

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that,

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so I wanted to gather some information regarding it. The Reason I am interested in joining the

tour

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is because of its location its in the mountains

and

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I love spending

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time in

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nature, being around it makes me feel happy and alive.

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, the scenic views will make me go through the

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while

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also

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doing something good for my body. Keeping that in mind, I wanted to know the starting date of the

tour

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along with

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its pricing, so if I am able to gather the information regarding it

sooner

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that will be

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as I know the spots might get filled pretty soon. The only concern I am having is I am not a fitness freak, I rarely excercise so I do not know

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I will be the right fit for it.

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, I will be looking forward to

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back from you. Please let me know as soon as you

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anything for me. Best Regards, S

sandhu.simar2004

May 10, 2026

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Answer all 3 points in a more clear way.

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Ask for dates and price in one direct sentence.

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Use a more even formal tone from start to end.

coherence and cohesion

Split long parts into clear paragraphs with one main idea.

coherence and cohesion

Link ideas with simple words like also, because, and however.

coherence and cohesion

Avoid extra words that make the meaning less clear.

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You say why you like the tour.

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You ask about dates and price.

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You show your worry about fitness.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear opening and ending.

coherence and cohesion

Most ideas are in a logical order.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

189 words

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