THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE AVERAGE PERCENTAGES IN TYPICAL MEALS OF THREE TYPES OF NUTRIENTS ALL OF WHICH MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATTEN TOO MUCH.

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The pie charts compare the average proportions of three nutrients —

sodium

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, saturated fat, and added sugar — consumed during four typical meals

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breakfast

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lunch

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dinner

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, and

snacks

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. These nutrients may be harmful if consumed in excessive amounts.

Overall

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dinner

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accounts for the highest proportions of

sodium

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and saturated fat intake,

whereas

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added sugar is predominantly consumed in

snacks

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In contrast

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breakfast

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contributes the smallest shares across all three nutrients. Regarding

sodium

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consumption,

dinner

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represents the largest proportion at 43%, followed by

lunch

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at 29%.

Breakfast

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and

snacks

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account for equal shares, each comprising 14% of total

sodium

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intake. A similar pattern can be observed for saturated fat, with

dinner

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again recording the highest figure at 37%,

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lunch

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contributes 26%.

Breakfast

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and

snacks

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make up smaller proportions at 16% and 21% respectively. In terms of added sugar,

snacks

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clearly dominate, accounting for 42% of consumption.

Dinner

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and

lunch

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contribute more moderate amounts at 23% and 19%,

whereas

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breakfast

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contains the lowest proportion at 16%.

m.hadavi20

May 13, 2026

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, breakfast, lunch, dinner, snacks with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 5 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:

nutrients
average percentage
sodium
saturated fat
added sugar
unhealthy
intake
typical meals
breakfast
lunch
dinner
snacks
contribute
health implications
convenience
taste preferences
cultural habits
balance nutrient intake
maintain a healthy diet

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THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE AVERAGE PERCENTAGES IN TYPICAL MEALS OF THREE TYPES OF NUTRIENTS ALL OF WHICH MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATTEN TOO MUCH.

It is said tht money brings happiness. What is your opinion?

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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem ?

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