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The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart and table illustrate data related to a public
library
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 in Little Chilfont city in 2016,
while
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 the bar chart shows the total
number
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 of
loans
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 from the
library
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 between 2007 and 2016.
Overall
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, the highest proportion of people in the 18–64 age group held
library
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 memberships.
In addition
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, the highest percentage of books borrowed by members was in children’s
fiction
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 and adult
fiction
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,
while
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 the total
number
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 of
loans
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 increased gradually between 2007 and 2011.
According to
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 the pie chart, 51% of people in the 18–64 age group held
library
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 memberships,
whereas
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 the lowest proportion was recorded among the 65-and-over age group, at 12%. Meanwhile, children’s
fiction
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 and adult
fiction
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 books accounted for 38% of
loans
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, which was the highest percentage.
In addition
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, in 2007, there was the lowest
number
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 of
loans
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, which was recorded at nearly 15,000 books,
whereas
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 the graph shows that the total
number
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 of
loans
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 rose gradually from 2007 to 2011.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, number, loans, fiction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overall
  • in general
  • the most
  • the least
  • higher
  • lower
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • drop
  • share
  • number
  • rate
  • group
  • age
  • men
  • women
  • books
  • children
  • adult
  • more than
  • less than
  • about the same
  • compared with
  • while
  • whereas
  • accounted for
  • made up
  • remained stable
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