The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie graph and the table illustrate the data, which is related to a public library in Little Chalfont city in 2016, and the bar chart shows that between 2007 and 2016, the total
number
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of
loans
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from the library.
Overall
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, the highest proportion of people in the age 18-64 group took the
membership
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.
In addition
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, there was the highest percentage of books, which were borrowed by the
membership
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holders, among the children's fiction and the adult fiction,
while
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the total
number
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of
loans
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increased gradually between 2007 and 2011.
According to
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the pie chart, 51% of people in the 18-64 age group took the
membership
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,
although
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the lowest percentage of people in the 65 and over age group took the
membership
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, which was recorded at 12%. Meanwhile, 38% of the children's fiction books and the adult non-fiction books were borrowed from the library and that was recorded as the highest percentage of
loans
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.
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, in 2007, there was a minimum
number
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of
loans
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, which was recorded as nearly 15,000
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,
whereas
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the graph shows the total
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of
loans
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gradually increased from 2007 to 2011.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, loans, membership with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overall
  • in general
  • the most
  • the least
  • higher
  • lower
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • drop
  • share
  • number
  • rate
  • group
  • age
  • men
  • women
  • books
  • children
  • adult
  • more than
  • less than
  • about the same
  • compared with
  • while
  • whereas
  • accounted for
  • made up
  • remained stable
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