The line graph gives information about the money spent on books in four different communities: Germany, France, Italy and Australia between 1995 and 2005

The line graph gives information about the money spent on books in four different

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throughout the decade.

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have seen only

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; meanwhile, Australia has seen the most advancement, with more than double the rate.

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, Italy experienced steady gain within the era. Looking first at the big rises of Australia, the highest rate is 30$ in 1995 to 73$ in 2005, followed by

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, which has almost the same amount

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of the duration with 70$. Germany started at approximately

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lot in 1995.

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the figure declined slightly to about $85 bank in 2003, Germany

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the highest rate among the other

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with 95$

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. Meanwhile , Italy and

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expansion. Italy began at about $50 much and fluctuated slightly during the first few years before rising steadily to around $60 sum in 2005.

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showed a steady upward trend, increasing from around $55 thousand in 1995 to $75 bank by the following years. In conclusion, all four public spent more money on books over the decade. Australia saw a significant increase,

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Germany stayed dominant

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of the cycle.

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,

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and Italy rose steadily in the rest of the date.