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participation
number Correct determiner usage
the
for
various events and sports at Change preposition
of participants for
social
centre in Melbourne, Australia Correct article usage
the social
for
two decades from 2000 to 2020.
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Overall
, Linking Words
while
participation rate soared for some activities, others witnessed a decline, and one remained popular Linking Words
overtime
.
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over time
Firstly
, the film club appeared as the most popular activity. In 2000, it started Linking Words
approximately
64 Change preposition
with approximately
members
, and for the first Use synonyms
decade
it experienced Add a comma
decade,
slight
dip to 60 people. But it eventually increased to 65 Correct article usage
a slight
members
in 2020.
Martial arts fluctuated over the years. It started with nearly 36 participants in 2000, but decreased to roughly 30 in 2005 . Use synonyms
However
, it gradually grew to 39 Linking Words
members
in 2010. For the next decade, it followed the same changing trend with little decline in 2015 and growth in 2020.
Table tennis showed a significant rising trend. In 2000, there were just below 20 participants, with a slight increase to just over 20 people by 2005. It remained stable for 5 years before a dramatic boost to more than 50 Use synonyms
members
in the final year, 2020.
Amateur dramatics, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, experienced the biggest downward trend in two decades. For the first 5 Linking Words
years
it rose from around 26 to approximately 29 participants before witnessing a rapid drop from 29 to almost 7 people in 2020.
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years,
Finally
, musical performances started from nothing in 2005. They steadily gained popularity, reaching around 12 in 2010 and approximately 19 in 2020.Linking Words