The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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This
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graph illustrates information about the consumption of 3 different
typs
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types
of fast
food
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in Britain from 1970 to 1990.It includes
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numbers
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from 0 to 600 .
This
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graph shows the
cansumption
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consumption
of fast
food
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in gram including
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Hamburger
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hamburgers
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,
fish
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&
chips
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and Pizza. As you can see in
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graph ,in 1970, the
hamburger
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it is by almost 50
grams
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while
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fish
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and
chips
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used by
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were
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almost 100
grams
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,
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the pizza
is the
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higher than
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hamburger
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the hamburger
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,
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fish and
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at
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chips
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by 300
grams
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.In 1975,the
hamburger
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is grow
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gradually
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gradually,
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it is used by up to 50
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while
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the
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apply
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fish
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and
chips
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,
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apply
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is rise
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rose
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by 100
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. The
pizze
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go down to 290
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.In 1980,the
hamburger
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is climb
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climbed
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slowly to 100
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,
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however
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however,
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the
fish
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and
chips
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jump
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jumped
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to 150
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.The
pizze
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decline to almost 200
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.In 1985, the
hamburger
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increase
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increased
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slightly
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the
fish
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and
chips
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it is racket
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increased
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to 300
grams
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.The
pizze
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stay constant
in
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at
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200
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.In 1990,the
hamburger
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sharply
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shot
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up to 300
grams
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but
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, but
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the
fish
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and
chips
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jump tp 500
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,
the
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and the
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pizze
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still in
same
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the same
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range
200
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, 200
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grams
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.The
fish
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and
chips
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is racket more
than
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popular than
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hamburger
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the hamburger
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. In sum,the garph explain clearly the 3 different
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types
of fast
food
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in Britain. The highest number of fast
food
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is
fish
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and
chips
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in 1990 . The least number of fast
food
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is
hamburger
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in 1970.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, hamburger, fish, chips, grams, pizze with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "jump" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rise
  • grow
  • increase
  • go up
  • climb
  • steady
  • sharp
  • rise steadily
  • fall
  • decrease
  • drop
  • remain
  • stay
  • level off
  • peak
  • high
  • low
  • be higher than
  • be lower than
  • in the end
  • at the start
  • over the period
  • by 1990
  • from 1970 to 1990
  • more than
  • less than
  • compare
  • contrast
  • the most
  • the least
  • overall
  • during the period
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