The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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This

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graph illustrates information about the consumption of 3 different

typs

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types

of fast

food

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in Britain from 1970 to 1990.It includes

number

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numbers

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from 0 to 600 .

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graph shows the

cansumption

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consumption

of fast

food

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in gram including

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Hamburger

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hamburgers

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fish

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chips

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and Pizza. As you can see in

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graph ,in 1970, the

hamburger

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it is by almost 50

grams

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while

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, while

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fish

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and

chips

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used by

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were

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almost 100

grams

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;

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the pizza

is the

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was

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higher than

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hamburger

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the hamburger

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fish and

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chips

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by 300

grams

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.In 1975,the

hamburger

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is grow

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grew

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gradually

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gradually,

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it is used by up to 50

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while

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, while

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the

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apply

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fish

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and

chips

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apply

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is rise

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rose

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by 100

grams

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. The

pizze

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go down to 290

grams

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.In 1980,the

hamburger

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is climb

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climbed

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slowly to 100

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;

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however

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the

fish

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and

chips

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jump

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to 150

grams

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.The

pizze

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decline to almost 200

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.In 1985, the

hamburger

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increase

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increased

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slightly

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the

fish

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and

chips

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it is racket

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increased

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to 300

grams

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.The

pizze

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stay constant

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200

grams

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.In 1990,the

hamburger

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sharply

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shot

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up to 300

grams

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but

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, but

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the

fish

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and

chips

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jump tp 500

grams

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the

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and the

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pizze

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still in

same

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the same

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range

200

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, 200

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grams

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.The

fish

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and

chips

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is racket more

than

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popular than

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hamburger

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the hamburger

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. In sum,the garph explain clearly the 3 different

typs

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types

of fast

food

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in Britain. The highest number of fast

food

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fish

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and

chips

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in 1990 . The least number of fast

food

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hamburger

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in 1970.

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May 18, 2026

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, hamburger, fish, chips, grams, pizze with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "jump" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
31
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

227 words

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level off
peak
high
low
be higher than
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at the start
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by 1990
from 1970 to 1990
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