The diagram below shows the transport preferences among young people in Great Britain, the USA, Germany and France in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

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The bar graph portrays the transport preferences in younger generations from varied nations.
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with, we can see that leaving aside Germany, the most
prefered
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preferred
method of transport is the car. Great
britain
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Britain
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and
USA
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the USA
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have the same percentage of people who
rather
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prefer
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cars
than
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other
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vehicle
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vehicles
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. In Germany, people choose bikes and
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motorcycle
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motorcycles
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, almost the same
,
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in
adittion
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addition
,
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motorcycle is
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motorcycles are
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the
less
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least
popular
vehicle
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in all countries except for the United States. In
great britain
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Great Britain
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, cars are the most used vehicles,
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a 60%
then
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bycicle, with almost a 30% and the
less
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least
used is the
motorcycle
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with
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, with
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a 10% of bicycles drivers
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apply
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, there is a 20% of
motorcycle
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owners. In conclusion, cars are the most popular
vehicle
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in most of the countries, and motorcycles are the
less
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least
used
vehicle
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in general.

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