The graph bellow shows four categories of citrus fruits and top countries to which these were exported in thousand tones in 2012.

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The bar charts depict the top nations around the world that export four varieties of citrus fruits in 2012. (Units are measured in thousands of tons)

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, the US and Mexico were the biggest exporters in 2012, with oranges being the most exported item among other provided categories. Starting with oranges, South Africa took the lead in

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category by exporting over 1000,

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in the second place is

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an African country named Egypt, as it exported precisely 500. Afterwards came the United States with roughly 400. Coming to lemons and grapefruits, Mexico was the main exporter of these two goods in general,

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Turkey surpassed it when it comes to grapefruits, as it traded exactly 400 pieces,

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the Latin American country accounted for 300. Meanwhile, America recorded 200, a figure that equals the nation's lemon distribution ratio and exceeded Argentina's, but not Mexico's, which registered 500 more or less.

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The Mexican Republic exported 500 other sour fruits alongside the USA and Eygpt whom were small contributors.

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The graph bellow shows four categories of citrus fruits and top countries to which these were exported in thousand tones in 2012.

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