The two maps illustrate the changes in the town of Dalton between the years 1815 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The town of

Dalton

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had witnessed several changes between the years 1815 and 2015. The different features can clearly

show

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in two main elements: the

inviroment

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environment

and the industrial development. In the year 1815, the map shows a

river

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. The

river

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is

deviding

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dividing

the

Dalton

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Forest, which has a huge amount of trees and different kinds of them from the

houses

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. Across the

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river

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river,

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there is a

street

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and

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, and

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it is the only one in the area. The

street

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landse bitween

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land between

Dalton

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Hall

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and The

Hall

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Farm

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. In the

Hall

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Farm

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there is

Bridleway

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a Bridleway

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,

it

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which

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is used for crossing the

river

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so

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it’s easier for

animals

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and humans to transfer. The

Hall

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Farm

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is where most of the

animals

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, because

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are kept, because

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it’s where they have easier access to water. and nutrition. On the other side of the

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street

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street,

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there is

Dalton

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Hall

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it

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shares

alot

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a lot

of features with the

Hall

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Farm

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,

accept

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except

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it has

less

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fewer

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animals

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and more

houses

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. After 20

decades

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years

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in the year 2015,

Dalton

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town had shown a

noticable

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noticeable

change. The number of streets

have

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has

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increased

alot

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a lot

,

due to

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the revolution that happend to trasport method. There are new bridge over the

river

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insted

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instead

of the Bridleway,

accept

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except that

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the two sides are as advanced and

moderen

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modern

as each other. The

Dalton

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Forest had dramaticly dicreased it’s number of trees.

Insted

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Instead

of the

trees

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trees,

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there is an industrial zone away from the majority of

houses

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and a hospital. On the other side of the

river

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is where

Dalton

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town

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apply

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changed the most. It has a large number of

houses

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, a school and a hotel across the

street

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.

Dalton

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town’s different

feature

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features

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in the

year

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years

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1815 and 2015 hugely depend on the different

life style

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lifestyles

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. It went from humans and

animals

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only needing water

food

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, food

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and

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, and

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houses

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to survive to more complex

need

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needs

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that

requir

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require

advanced roads and factories.