The diagram shows the process of water treatment

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The diagram illustrates the
proscdure
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procedure
of
water
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treatment.
Overall
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,
The
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process consists of several stages starting with the
intaking
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intake
screens. And it is ending with flowing out the
water
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from
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flowing out of
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the pump into the faucet. First of all, the screens
are
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took
water
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from the sea.
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, the pumps
are
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took the
water
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to the next third stage.
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, the
water
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is mixed with oxidants and chlocide
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third
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factor.
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, the
water
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is entered in flocculation stage.
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this
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,
The
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the
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water
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is prepared in
settling
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a settling
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basin. Next
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apply
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this
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,
The
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the
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chlorine is
adedd
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added
.
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it flows through the pump to the membrance is
filltered
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filtered
.
Sunsequntly
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Subsequently
, it into to the disinfection is mixed with chlorine
and fluoride
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, fluoride, and
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also
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lime.
At the end
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, it flows through the
last
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pump to the faucet.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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