The maps below show the centre of a small town called (slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the downtown of

small

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a small

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city

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called Islip, and plans for its improvement.

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The

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the

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city

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will have a lot of changes. The

residental

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residential

areas will be increased. It will be

urbanaized

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urbanised

. And, the system of the roads will be changed completely. First of all, in the future, by the north, the countryside will be removed by the dual

carrigeway

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carriageway

. The

carrigeway

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roadway

will be changed

the road nework of

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the

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city,

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city's road network

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when

its

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it's

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around the whole

city

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of now, there are two ways

one

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, one

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from the west and

other

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the other

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from the east, they connected to the main one in the

middle

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, shops will be replaced to shopping centre,

bus

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a bus

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station and

car

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a car

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park, those three facilities beside each other. Beside them, from the east,

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new housing

are

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apply

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will be added. Under

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directly

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direction

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the

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new way will be added for pedestrians only. When under

this

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road,

The

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the

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second shop will be moved from the north to the

middle

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of the

city

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. Now, there is a housing area in the

middle

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. It will be moved under the shop to be more south.

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them, from the east, new housing spaces will be added. At the same place, the park will be smaller than now.

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, the school will be stayed the same place,

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south of

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the south from west side. In the south, the housing will be moved from the

middle

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slightly east.

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May 28, 2026

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, middle with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
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2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

238 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban planning
town centre
development
infrastructure
residential
commercial
pedestrian
amenities
refurbishment
green spaces
public transport
conservation
modernization
facilities
expansion
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