Human activities have negative effects on plants and animals species. Some people think that is too late to do anything about effective measures can taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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Civilization

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existed

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a fraction of time on

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, the activities done by

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the population

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caused so much damage to other species

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globally

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due to

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the rapid growth of industries

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and never-ending innovative technology. Some might argue that it is already too late to act on anything to bring the world back to its healthy state, but I personally disagree. Humans still have the chance to save the world

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the innovations mentioned earlier

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the key to success,

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raised awareness of the people. Human activities

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as hunting for rare species had already wiped out many

animals

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even before the actual industrial revolution.

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of awareness back in the time when science was not introduced as

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interests

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to populations.

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, as time

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, and education

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widely accessible

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majority of people, people

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been more aware and looking for

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solve

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the issues from the past. Currently, there are endangered

animals

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that their number is declining, and some might lose the

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one

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, I personally think it is not too late, even for the

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that has already been done. With the innovations and far more advanced

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of our population. We

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been

success

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in resurrecting

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extinct

animals

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by working with their DNA and

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them with suitable carriers. From

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laboratories

to sanctuaries, there are dedicated teams of professionals who work to bring those lost

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back to life, in order

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restore the state of the world that

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once almost permanently destroyed. In conclusion, humans might not have brought the whole population of

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extinct

animals

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back yet, and some were considered impossible to bring back, for now.

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, I believe that the same rapid growth of innovations that once wiped species of the earth, will

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key to

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the lost ones

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as well.

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Answer both sides more clearly. You talk more about your view, but the other side is short.

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Give one clear example for each side. This will make your ideas stronger.

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Make your opinion very clear in every body part, not only in the start and end.

coherence and cohesion

Put one main idea in one paragraph. Some sentences now are hard to follow.

coherence and cohesion

Use linking words in a simple and correct way, like 'however', 'for example', 'therefore', and 'as a result'.

coherence and cohesion

Check sentence order. A few ideas jump too fast from past damage to future science.

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You have a clear introduction and a clear conclusion.

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Your opinion is clear: you believe it is not too late.

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You stay on the topic of harm to animals and plants.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

322 words

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