The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1972 and 2000 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates how many
goods
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transferred
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were transferred
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in the
UK
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by four different
method
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methods
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of transport, from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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most of the
goods
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transported in
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UK
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the UK
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by road showed an upward trend
while
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pipeline remained relatively stable.
between
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1974 and 1986
things
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, the amount of goods
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carried in
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UK
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the UK
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by road increased and hit the highest point at 80 million
tonnes
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while
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, while
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goods
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carried in
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UK
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the UK
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by Water rose to around 55 million
tonnes
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and
stayed
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remained
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constant
followed by
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.
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Rail showed a little change
from
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, from
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40
m
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tonnes
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to approximately 38
m
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tonnes
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meanwhile
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. Meanwhile,
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pipeline peaked at about 24
m
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tonnes
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and remained unchanged.
from
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From
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1990 to 2002
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,
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goods
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carried in
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UK
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the UK
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by road rose gradually and reached 95
m
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tonnes
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. Thereafter,
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thereafter
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goods
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carried in
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UK
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the UK
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by water experienced a
little
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slight
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decline
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then
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, then
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grew slightly and stood at 60
m
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tonnes
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. Goods
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whereas
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goods
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carried in
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UK
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the UK
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using Rail
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by rail
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showed little change and recorded the highest figure at 40
m
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tonnes
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tonnes,
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while
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pipeline stood at 20
m
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tonnes
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, uk, tonnes, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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