The line graph below shows the total number of crime rates in three categories in England.

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The line graph compares the three regions in terms of crime rates that

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between 1970 and 2005.

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, the three regions experienced different trends

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time

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the car thefts rose with some fluctuations, the street robberies barely increased over time. As the graph shows, car thefts went up to

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400000 in 1970, and

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steadily increased to 1 million in 1990. Afterwards, the numbers climbed rapidly seasoning considerable growth to 1.6 million in 1995, and

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fell rapidly to 1 million in 2005.

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, the house burglaries stood at 200000 in 1970, and

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figure grew gradually to nearly 700000 in 1995.

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, the amount declined slowly to 500000in 2005.

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, the total number of robberies in the street amounted to only 100000 in 1970, and the rate remained unchanged in 1990.

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, the committed street theft grew respectively to 200000 in 2005.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons…experience.

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