The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

The diagram demonstrates how carbonated drinks are made.

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, the process consists of five main steps

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is first thoroughly cleaned

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and

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enriched with flavour

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before being bottled and canned.

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, it is sold to a supermarket. In the first stage, purification, raw

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is cleaned in a filter to remove foreign particles , and

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it is removed the possible contaminants though

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softener

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and chemicals. The cleaned

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is

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pumped into electric heaters, where

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is heated and evaporated. The vapour

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rises to the cooling pipe

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and moves to the vat, where it is infused with carbon dioxide.

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makes

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carbonated. In the remaining stage, carbonated

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is forced into another tank, where

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the colour, syrup, and flavor at the bottom of the tank. The special machine mixes the contents, turning

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into a uniform substance. The blended liquid is filtered before being poured into bottles or cans. In the final stage, they are packaged and sold to supermarkets.