The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Try for free →
The map below shows the plan of a proposed new plan, where housing is concentrated within the ring road in a
rounadbout
Correct your spelling
roundabout
fashion. To the right, there is a road that leads into the bus stand and parking area, exiting at the central left. There is just a major ring road and other adjoining roads that intersect between housing and industry. There are two industries located at the extreme right and extreme left, and houses establised
besides
Linking Words
them. The bus stands and parking areas appear to be constructed in the same geographical location, with each amenity diagonally opposite
each
Correct determiner usage
the
show examples
other. The recreational areas are facing south of the map towards one of the roads' wider
exit
Fix the agreement mistake
exits
show examples
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Add more linking words.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential housing
  • ring road
  • local roads
  • commercial zones
  • inhabitants
  • transportation system
  • bus terminals
  • train stations
  • recreational areas
  • sports facilities
  • educational institutions
  • schools
  • libraries
  • accessibility
  • industrial zones
  • outskirts
  • noise and pollution
What to do next:
Look at other essays: