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two maps present the modifications that have been implemented in the centre of a town since 1700.
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, two shops and eleven houses have been constructed
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the south side, in place of the fields, but the area covered
reamained aproximately
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remained approximately
the same.
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, a supermarket was placed there
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it is right next to the wide road that was created and the new roundabout, which is located on the High Street.
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, now there is a car park and a
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number of buildings in the northern part. They were built in place of the Goode Farm,
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was removed, but the size of the field covered
reamained
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remained
unchanged. At the same time, in place of the Steggle Farm,
it was constructed the Steggle Road
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the Steggle Road was constructed
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, cutting
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same ground from the field on the
northweastern
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northwestern
side.
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that field
has been created a public park
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, a public park has been created
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.
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, the centre of the town underwent a number of striking alterations,
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the construction of new buildings and the creation of new roads.

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