The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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It is a pie chart showing the comparisons between three types of nutrients in daily

meal

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USA

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the USA

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which

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are

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unhealthy if eaten too much. Overview,

dinner

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which

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apply

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is the major source of sodium and saturated fat for

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Americans

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, the snacks contain the main sugar in people’s

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meals

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breakfast

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is the lowest extra added

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daily meals. For sodium is far higher among

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apply

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dinner

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have the

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apply

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largest

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amount added

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which

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43% .

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by lunch with 26% .

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, snacks and

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are equal with 14% of sodium

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intake.

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The saturated fat

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a similar pattern in the highest of

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dinner

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with 37%.

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lunch can provide 26% of saturated fat. Snacks and

breakfast

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are the lowest with 21% and 16%.

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sugar

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mainly

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makes

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up from 42% of

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snacks

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Dinner

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is the second source with 23%,

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lunch and

breakfast

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represent 19% and 16%.

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Jul 11, 2026

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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