The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The flow chart indicates the massive ramifications of destruction
the
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natual
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natural
habitats.
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, there are 4 distinct consequences
attribute
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to
the
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cutting forests, which can be
categorized in
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2 main stages. The essential results of cutting down forests are flooding and soil
erosions
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erosion
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. The trees after
exploited
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, which
are disturbance
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the natural structure of the soil. The hard and 'baked' eventually combine with the water
runs
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that runs
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off and cause flooding.
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, the
blad
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bald
land
have
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few roots, which can hold the
top soils
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topsoil
.
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will create
top soil erodes
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topsoil erosion
.
In addition
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, the
exploit
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exploitation
activities can increase the
rush
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of forest
fire
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fires
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since the waste wood from logging is destroyed, and the micro-organisms feeding on
waste
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the waste
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lost
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. It can be seen that plants can
be returned
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less moisture to
air
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the air
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, which means
it
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they
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have less precipitation, and increased drought. The unique features
is
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the blend of three different results
including
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erosions, pioneer species engagement and
the
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drought contributes to the
less
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lower
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biodiversity.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • flow chart
  • consequence
  • deforestation
  • process
  • cutting down
  • loss
  • forest cover
  • wildlife habitat
  • disruption
  • ecosystems
  • soil erosion
  • water quality
  • release
  • carbon dioxide
  • atmosphere
  • contribute
  • global warming
  • climate change
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