Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter -describe what you like about the library - say what you don’t like - make suggestions for improvements

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to give you some suggestions that you asked a growing number of members to improvments to their services and facilities. I love your library since I was in junior high school, because my parents always invited me to visit your office library to improve my knowledge and to learn about a lot of book at your room.

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, I can learn from many books.

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, I can read a large number of stories

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such

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as the story of animals and the world, sometimes

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like medical

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stories

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, I like it.

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, I don't like

many

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people like children playing around the library

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they run and play. So

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why they bother my time and my focus on reading the book.

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is my perspective, you should improve the place where they play , especially for many children and

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make rules for their parents to decide whether their son can enter the room. Your member, Ajik

Arni Aqlina

Jul 14, 2026

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task response

Task response: Answer all three parts more fully. Say clearly what you like, what you do not like, and give two or three clear ideas to make the library better.

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Task response: Use a more clear letter style. Say why each idea is good for library users.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Put one main idea in each paragraph. This will make your letter easy to follow.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Use simple link words like also, but, because, so, and first. This will help your ideas join well.

task response

Task response: You wrote about what you like, what you do not like, and one way to improve the library.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear start, middle, and end.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

extensive collection
resourceful
helpful staff
friendly assistance
tranquil atmosphere
comfortable environment
limited operating hours
restricted access
insufficient study spaces
quiet spot
extend the hours
accommodate
private study rooms
cater
digital resources
e-books
audiobooks

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