The maps below show part of a village in 1910, and the same part of that village in 2010.

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The maps below show part of a village in 1910, and the same part of that village in 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show part of a village in 1910, and the same part of that village in 2010.
The plan illustrated the changes of village in 1910 and the same one in 2010.
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, Shelton village had seen significant changes in facilities and the layout of the village. Despite changes, the post office and the school stayed unchanged. In 1910, as the graph demonstrates, the post office was located in the north-eastern side of the suburb. The centre of the hamlet had a big house surrounded by a green zone. At the top of the High Street, a grocer's house and a baker's were located, and below the street, three houses were placed. There were two facilities school and a butcher, at the top of the school street, which passed from the left corner of the south section of the layout to the north section. Turning to the early 21st century. Trees and large home demolished in order to build modern houses in their place.
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grocer was changed to a cafe, and the baker was
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destroyed in order to build apartments.
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, building which were below the high roadway were unchanged.
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, several apartments were added next to them. At the bottom of the post office, several condominiums were built.
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butchers disappeared to make way for supermarket parking. The apartment was demolished in order to build a bank.

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