The line graph shows information about the salary of three sports received on a yearly basis over a period of 31 years from 1970 to 2000.

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The diagram displays data about the income of
players
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in football,
baseball
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,and
baseball
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for three decades from 1970 to 2000.
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,there was a dramatic increase in basketball. The football
salaries
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were fluctuating over the
years
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, and the
salaries
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of
players
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for
baseball
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were increasing slightly over the
years
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. The
players
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'
salaries
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in basketball were the highest
salaries
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among the other sports,
although
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they started with the lowest
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with $0 in 1970 and started to rise steadily until 1985 at almost over 500,000 $. After that started to increase charply reaching the highest salary rate at ander 2,500,00$.The
baseball
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started with the highest salary level among the other sports at above 0$ in1970 and
then
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continued to rise steadily over the
years
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and stopped at almost 1,500,00 in 2000,which was the second highest for
players
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' income. The football income was increasing steadily in the first five
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,
then
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started to increase sharply until 1995 at above 850,000$ .After that started to drop slightly until the end
reaching
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under 850,000%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words players, baseball, salaries, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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