The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.

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The
diagram illustrates the ways of greenhouse gases which trap the
energy
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from the sun.
Overall
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, the processes of greenhouse gases consist of around seven stages beginning with the
energy
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of the sun
that is
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generated and passing through numerous steps. After that, it
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ends
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with the
heat
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trapped.
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initially
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, the sun emits a strong
heat
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of
energy
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to the land surface, and
this
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heat
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becomes associated with the trees that absorb carbon dioxide near the sea.
Then
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, the
heat
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is reflected into the atmosphere. After that, the
heat
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is released into the space of
energy
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above the
earth
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.
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, the vehicles,
such
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as trucks, cars and ferries are able to generate extra carbon dioxide from burning
fossile
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fossil
fuels. As well, the
heat
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trapped by greenhouse gases undergoes several processes throughout the period for producing the extra carbon dioxide.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, heat with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • natural process
  • greenhouse effect
  • Earth's surface
  • sun's energy
  • atmosphere
  • reflected
  • absorbed
  • re-radiated
  • greenhouse gases
  • carbon dioxide
  • methane
  • nitrous oxide
  • water vapour
  • ultraviolet radiation
  • infrared radiation
  • fossil fuel burning
  • deforestation
  • concentration
  • global warming
  • melting ice caps
  • glaciers
  • rising sea levels
  • extreme weather patterns
  • mitigating
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