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The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart compares the figures of worldwide
students
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 travelling to the UK university over the years: 1995, 2000, 2005, 2010 and 2015.It shows education seekers from four distinct continents: Asia, Africa, Europe and North America.
Overall
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, Asian
students
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 reached the highest peak,
while
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 people from North America recorded the
least point
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lowest points
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 in studying abroad
to
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in
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 the UK. In 1995,there were 60
students
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 from Asia
which
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, which
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 doubled rapidly to 120
students
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 in the year 2015.
In contrast
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, African
students
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 remained constant at 20
students
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 between 1995 and 2005 , which increased slightly to 30
students
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 by 2010 and the recoverd steadily in 2015.
According to
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 the graph,
North
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the North
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 American population stayed the same in the first five years ,dropped in 2005 and grew sharply from 2010 to 2015.
Community
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The community
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 from Europe showed fluctuation between 50
to
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and
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 55
students
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • go up
  • more
  • less
  • from
  • to
  • in
  • year
  • first
  • last
  • there
  • then
  • this
  • and
  • but
  • not
  • also
  • time
  • for
  • some
  • new
  • use
  • two
  • our
  • we
  • you
  • your
  • they
  • these
  • give
  • day
  • most
  • us
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