The chart below gives information about how families in one country spend their weekly income in 1968 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relavant.

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The chart illustrates the information on expenditure by families, spending their average weekly income, in one nation between 1968 and 2018.
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, it can be seen that the most noticeable spendings were food and leisure,
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the lowest was fuel and power, and personal
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in the same year. In 1968, the trend of expenditure, pouring into food the most, by 35%, housing, and clothing and footwear were shared by 10% from income. There were four things, leisure, household
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, personal
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, and transport, which were recorded by 10% and the rest 8%, respectively. The least were fuel and power, receiving approximately 6%. In 2018, the trend was considerably changed, leisure increased to 22%,
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house and transport increased to 19% and 14%, respectively. In the opposite way, Food, fuel and power, clothing
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, footwear, and
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footware and, personal
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faced a decrease, 17%, 4%, 5% and
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4%, Repectively. Meanwhile,
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households
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still
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stable by 8%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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