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The chart below gives information on the birth rate among women in England, from 1973 to 2020. The figures are measured in births per 1000 women.

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The line chart illustrates changes in the birth rate among
women
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 across four distinct age groups in England between 1973 and 2020, measured in births per 1,000
women
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.
Overall
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,
while
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 birth rates for
women
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 aged under 20, 25, and over 40 experienced
overall
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 declines or remained minimal, the 28–34 age group saw a substantial upward trend, eventually becoming the dominant group by 2020. Looking at the details,
women
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 aged 20 to 25 experienced a dramatic plunge from a high of 120 births per 1,000
women
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 in 1973 down to approximately 20 by 2020.
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, birth rates for those aged under 20 and 40 and over remained consistently low throughout the period, hovering under 20 and 10
respectively
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, with only minor fluctuations in years
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 as 1993 and 2001. Meanwhile, the 28–34 demographic followed a drastically different trajectory. Starting at just 20 in 1973,
this
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 group surged to 50 in 1980,
leveled
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 off through the 1990s, and
then
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 climbed steadily to reach a peak of approximately 80 births per 1,000
women
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 by 2020, overtaking all other brackets.

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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • women aged 15 to 44
  • births per 1000 women
  • rise
  • fall
  • go up
  • go down
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • lowest point
  • highest point
  • figure
  • rate
  • trend
  • overall
  • at the start
  • at the end
  • during the period
  • remain stable
  • change a lot
  • slight rise
  • sharp fall
  • gradual decrease
  • reach a peak
  • drop again
  • compared with
  • higher than
  • lower than
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