The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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diagram shows many steps to

product

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produce

fabric

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from

show examples

bamboo

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tree

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trees

show examples

. There are 9 steps which need to

changes

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change

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bamboo

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to we suits. In the fist, we need to plant the

bamboo

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tree

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in spring

when

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, which

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the

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show examples

good time for

they

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them

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. After 6

month

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months

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, we can go to

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bamboo

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the bamboo

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tree

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to cut

down

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them down

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them and soft they

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and store them

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big

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a big

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box

on the container in

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in a container on a

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truck that will be sent to

production

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the production

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company. In the company,

bamboo

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tree

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trees

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are

cutted

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cut

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and

break

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broken

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down into short pieces by

cut

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a cutting

machine. After that, they are crushed

which

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, which

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will

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apply

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make liquid pulp. The liquid

separate

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separates

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long fibres by the filter

and

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, and

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the fibres

which

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apply

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are

softed

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softened

add

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adding

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hydrogen oxide and armine

by oxide

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apply

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. The

soften fibes

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soft fibres

are

spined

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spun

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by machine after that to make

yarm

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yarn

which

need

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needs

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to creat weave. In conclusion, the weaves are made

fabric

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of fabric

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which

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, which

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important

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an important

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thing to make

cloths

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clothes

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bamboo, tree with synonyms.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
34
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

153 words

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fiber
yarn
thread
weave
knit
stages
steps
process
harvest
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crush
break
fiber
spin
weave
finish
wash
dye
color
soft
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material
final
make
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The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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